I like where this goes. I love the details about L.A.S.T. (So well named as well!) and the presentation, it gave the situation a reality I really appreciated. I totally love how the story plays ut, that she finds someone and finds value and meaning. It is well written, and draws you in. I did find myself almost hoping that they would accept it as a fair trade, the time they had together in their final year, worth more than the rest of their lives could have been, but then I liked how you ended it anyway!
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Very happy you like where I took your story. I am very new to writing fiction. Last week was my first real attempt, this is #2. I definitely like having the prompts or half stories as a starting point.
I've been loving reading your stories since I helped get you your Curie vote back in April and then added it to the Author Showcase that week. I am very happy that the other curators took notice and have gotten you a few more votes now. Definitely well-deserved.