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RE: Private Lies Part 17

in #fiction7 years ago

your description of momentary dissociation that comes over us when overwhelmed by emotion is spot on.

Shadowy flies of fear swirled about her, clouding her vision, increasing in number... as the buzzing inside her built to a crescendo...

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yes, I think I know that emotion well :)