A lot of emotion packed into a short space. That's very hard to do, and you did it well. Good foreshadowing, good characterization. I'm glad I found you.
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A lot of emotion packed into a short space. That's very hard to do, and you did it well. Good foreshadowing, good characterization. I'm glad I found you.
So glad you liked it, thank you! Will definitely have much more to come!