Thank youu :) I liked the title in Spanish more, I think. It has a cool sound. I don't know if it's because I'm a native. Perhaps the opposite occurs to native English speakers!
And yes. The poor man had a tragic ending for his daughter and himself. I want to tell his backstory but I'm not sure when I'll have the plot and the characters ready. :)
i totally agree! i hear ya, i'm learning how bits and pieces come together by all this practice writing i am doing. also, i realize that sometimes the story may not develop as i first thought with many changes taking place. strange really.