Your writing is very sensorial. I can see everything and even feel it. The end is impressive. This story somewhat reminded me of "Funes, el memorioso" (Funes the Memorious) from Jorge Luis Borges. If you haven't read it, you have to! I know you'll love it :) http://marom.net.technion.ac.il/files/2016/07/Funes-the-Memorious.pdf
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Wow, what a great comment, thank you so much @dolivero !
Hey, the link you posted isn't working :( Would like to read the piece if you get a chance to fix it!
Ow, that's weird :( it works for me. Try with this one! @danielshortell https://www.theparisreview.org/fiction/4604/funes-the-memorious-jorge-luis-borges
Ok, cool, thanks @dolivero !