He's a fearless kid, isn't he? For some reason I found myself thinking about your cousins or 'mamier and dadier' through this section. I feel like the way you wrote this part made me see through his eyes and through the eyes of others equally. And maybe because he's 'made his escape' now it' s not as if there's a destination to root for him to get to LOL. I instead am thinking about his parents and how worried they would be.
Great job, well done, fantastic as usual my friend!
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Thanks for taking the time to read, my friend! I really wanted to set this up as sort of a roller coaster. As you mentioned before, I've set it up so that readers can clearly look through Ledd's eyes, without taking the feeling of the people around him into account. I think this blind perspective approach is interesting because you're forced to look inward and think about how you would feel if you were in their shoes.
This was one of my favorite chapters to write, and it's certainly one of the most pivotal. I'm currently writing the SILVER LINING entry to this, so expect a meaty entry this Friday (or Thursday your time, I think)
I will read anything you write, as I've said before you are extremely gifted, I love you style!
You're doing an amazing job, loving every bit of it :)
Thank you for saying that! :') It's always so nice to hear touching sentiments like that. Warms my heart. I hope you know that the continued motivation you give really means a lot, my friend :D