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RE: Old Soldier - Short Story

in #fiction6 years ago

Your story is interesting. I like it. Your character is intriguing. It somehow resonates a subtle character with a mysterious background. I am sure he is of high value in the military since he is visited not by just ordinary messengers but high ranking officials. I am looking forward to reading more about him and his past exploits. I hope this will have a continuation.

Keep up the good writing, @stormlight24. Cheers!

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Thank you very much. There are more parts, I will be glad to see you opinion on that parts as well. Yes, that was my intention, to give his character mystery.