Matching the names was a nice touch.
A promising start indeed - this is practically begging to be continued!
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Matching the names was a nice touch.
A promising start indeed - this is practically begging to be continued!
Thank you! I'm glad I saw your post and found the contest. I haven't written fiction in a few weeks, and I so enjoyed this!
You should definitely write more of it!