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RE: The Curse of Christmas Future - Finish The Story Contest (Week 68)

in #fiction5 years ago

Ho Ho Ho and a merry corporate Christmas too. @raj808 this is a great ending. I love your description of the workshop with all the toys “Rocking horses shook violently, teddy bears fell from shelves and toy cars trundled across the floor”. And you brought in more of Rudolph’s backstory tying it in so well, “Rudolph merchandise” I hope that means the very annoying Christmas song ;). “Black misty tendrils” ah that makes it so creepy and then you finish with the dreaded “Anti-Santa” and Rudolph to the rescue. Great fun to read :)

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Thanks Gaby. I'm glad you enjoyed the tale of Bezos... Ermmm, I mean Mr M A Anzo getting his comeuppance in the north pole.

Amazon killing Santa and ruining Christmas... not on my FTS watch 🤣😉🎅

Happy Christmas