Where is the continuation Jess? This is cruel.
I must say I liked both narration and the language used. It's the sort of storytelling that I like, the slight noir twang, the self aware and self-recrimination of the modern non-hero.
I like it.
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Today. Today I will finish this out. I just got sidetracked by some work stuff, but if I have to lock myself away and disconnect from everything else, I will finish this today lol. Thanks so much for the thoughtful feedback. It's exactly what I was going for and very gratifying to hear it so aptly described and know it was recognized as such <3
Grouchy. Like Groucho Marx. I just thought of it :D