RE: Family Reunions (Art Prompt Writing Contest)

[grammarnazi]

You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

Tamsin had poured her and Mandy the end of thier second bottle of red and had her phone switched off in her pocket.

It should be their instead of thier.

Comments

[samuraihedgehog]

Thanks, how did I not notice that? Oh , you're a bot. Thought you read it quick. Thanks anyway :)

[mizdais]

Wow! Nice Job