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(These posts re-presents a story I first had published in 2007 in Science Fiction Trails Magazine. If you missed the first part, you can find it here.)
The day flew by, and his men got more and more nervous as evening approached. The big show wasn't supposed to start until sunset local time, but there should have been people here by now. He had run into Mr. Smith a little after noon. The run was putting up some odd green boxes in various corners of the big tent. A little bigger than a lunch pail, they had a strange...roundness to them. Like they had grown like mushrooms and Smith had simply harvested them off a giant tree. "Cameras," he explained when pressed. "Our employers want the evening to be captured forever."
"I ain't ever seen cameras like that before."
"Oh, they're very new. From...Europe."
Buck frowned, but finally relented, with the proviso that he receive a copy of the prints for possible publicity purposes. "Oh, our mutual employers will be happy to oblige in any way that they are able." The strange cameras set, the little man pulled another one of his vanishing acts.
Buck continued his pacing, wondering for the hundredth time why he had gotten them all into this. The sun was painting the rocks on the horizon colors even Buck had never seen before when their crowd finally began to arrive. His men stopped what they were doing and stared openly. Indians. An entire crowd of Indians. Men and women marching in long rows, not one under thirty. Buck didn't recognize the cut of the cloth garments they wore or the abstract patterns of the beadwork. He heard somebody behind him mutter something in Sioux about the "reptile people" or the "snake worshippers". One of the Indians from the show. Buck wished his Sioux wasn't so rusty, and he knew that if he pressed the man he'd only get tight-lipped silence in return.
The Indians did not go to any of the sideshows, did not visit the food booths or engage in any games of skill or chance. They simply paid their V-nickels and filed into the big tent. It was as if they weren't here to see the show at all, but the show was simply a means to some greater end. Something to be endured, like the difficulties of a pilgrimage. Buck knew that his show was no shrine. How had Smith gotten them to come? What had he told them?
And would the show be able to deliver?
Buck let the tent fill up, ignoring the worried looks from the sideshow men. The company was still being paid enough to keep the whole mess afloat for another three years. The booth men would get over their wounded pride. Buck was more concerned because the success of the sideshows always gave him a gauge to how the main show was going to go that night. He was in the dark here about a lot of things.
The sun at last sank below the horizon, and still no sign of his mysterious patrons. Smith had told him to start at sunset regardless, and Buck didn't want to find his troupe stranded in the middle of nowhere for some stupid breach of contract nonsense. The tent glowed a warm brown from the lamps lit inside. Buck put on his hat. It was time to start.
Seeing him enter, the band picked up the opening tune. Buck took a moment to slip into his stage persona and to survey the crowd. He almost fell on his backside. The luxury box was full, and with perhaps two dozen of the strangest critters he had ever laid eyes on. It wasn't just that the outfits they wore were a stunning collage of finery that could have come from the court of Louis XIV or even that of Good Queen Bess. The masks, though extravagant even if this had been a Carnival, were not out of place with the outfits. No, it was the people themselves that were so strange.
Not that they were unattractive. Quite the contrary. Men and women moth displayed a slender regularity and symmetry of form and line, adding up to more beauty in quality and quantity than Buck had ever seen in one place. He wondered if there were two dozen handsomer people on the planet. They were beautiful, but if you looked at them for any length of time, you just couldn't help but feel that something was...off. Like they were wearing these beautiful bodies just like they were simply another part of their costumes. That they could take them off just as easily as they could remove their masks.
A drum rolled loudly behind Buck's head. He had missed his opening cue. Coughing away a curse, Buck stepped into the spotlight. "Ladies and gentlemen! They call me Buck Reynolds, and I'm honored to welcome you this evening to the Buck Reynolds Western Extravaganza! Tonight before your very eyes, you'll see all the pageantry and drama, the heartache and romance that is the Wild West. So sit back, and enjoy the show!"
The Indians remained motionless, though the party in the box applauded at his words, the sound seeming so small in the big tent. Buck slipped away as the opening act began. A tribal dance, if things went according to script.
Buck had a feeling that tonight things weren't going to go to script.
But in spite of his premonition, things went well. Things went really well. Through the subsequent acts unrolled the history of the West. The grandeur of the Plains covered with seas of buffalo. The hard, but noble life of all who drew their life from the wild land. Even the encounter of White and Black and Red and Yellow civilizations seemed less of a bloodbath, and more of an intricate dance. If the dance included tragedy, if it included horrible, nameless things, that was simply because the dancers were men. That did not take away from the joy of the dance, from the adventure.
The audience ate it up. While the Indians' faces remained ever impassive, Buck could feel the energy coming from their active interest. There was something special about this show. It didn't paper over what had happened to anyone; there was more than enough guilt to go around. But somehow everything that had happened was incorporated into a larger story. A story that was still being written. A story that the audience could help write the end to.
If the Indians calmly approved, those seated in the luxury box could not contain their enthusiasm. They whooped with the Indians, drove steel with the Negroes and Chinese, lived and fought and died and struggled on with the Whites. The animals seemed to love the attention, and Buck could have sworn he saw a pair of horses preening for the box's approval. He had thought they would have been put off by the same oddness he had noticed earlier, but they seemed much more troubled by Mr. Smith's strange cameras and their flashes coming at irregular intervals.
He had been superb in his own performance, if he had to say so himself. Buck found himself getting lost in the story of the character he played. The scarred veteran of the Civil War, emotionally alone though surrounded by men. Lost on a campaign, and nursed back to health by a lovely Indian maid. He proved himself to the tribe by winning a sharpshooting contest. Face to face with one of the braves, they both fired. His bullet missed, where Buck's bullet split the feather of the man's headband in half. It was clearly a deliberate shot, and Buck's mercy was greeted by the tribe with loud approval.
The narrative paused for further displays of sharpshooting for the audience. Not quite sure what compelled him, Buck went over to the box and took the hand of a woman. Her fellows egged her on, and Buck brought her to a large target in the center of tent. As men fastened her hands and legs to the target, Buck leaned in and whispered, "Just don't move. Everything will be ok." She stared back at him with deep, penetrating eyes. And Buck wasn't sure she had understood him.
Men tied balloons around the perimeter of the woman's body, while Buck fastened a blindfold around his eyes. The crowd hushed, not realizing that he had paced out his distance to the target and could hit any given spot on it with his eyes closed. A hush fell over the crowd. The roll of a drum. Six shots from his pearl-handled Colts. Six popped balloons.
Even the Indians were standing and stamping their feet for that one as Buck took his blindfold off.
The show whirled on. An evil colonel had conspired with a train baron to defraud the Indians of their land. Buck rides through the surrounding army to get word to the general at the fort. The besieged village gives up hope but battles on. Suddenly bugles sound. It's the cavalry, with Buck and the general at the head. The colonel stands down, and he and the railroad man are taken into custody. A telegram comes from the President. The lands are to be the tribe's in perpetuity. Buck embraces his Indian bride, and the lights fade.
It hadn't gone that way, not in real life. The West wasn't like that. And yet...it could have been. For a brief moment under the big tent, it was like that. All the potential and all the beauty, all the wide-open spaces, had been large enough for anyone of good will to share. The senses of exploration and adventure that had driven men ever Westward had also driven them to explore new frontiers, of friendship and understanding and spirit.
It was all over before Buck had really realized it, and he found himself standing apart from his troupe, Mr. Smith pumping his hand. "I knew it. I knew when I saw you in New York that you would be the man for the job. They loved it! They absolutely loved it! They want to meet you. To congratulate you."
Smith steered him over to the luxury box. The occupants were laughing and chatting loudly, and to Buck's surprise, he realized that he didn't know what language they could possibly be speaking in. No language he had ever heard in the States or on the Continent.
All eyes turned to him. A man arose who appeared older than the others. He was arrayed like a king, all in gold and blue and purple and scarlet. He smiled at the woman who had starred in Buck's trick shooting performance. "Thank you."
Two simple words, spoken in a rough, rasping voice that could not speak English. Not one that was unused to the language, but one whose entire production mechanism was unsuited for producing human sounds. And then the king of the patrons cupped his hand over Buck's forehead.
Images flashed through his mind. It was like staring directly into a photographer's flash powder. But with each flash thoughts and images and emotions burst into Buck's head. Somehow he knew it was the history of the person touching him. A black sky filled with stars. A green and blue world teeming with life. A wriggling upward and upward of a creature that was neither lizard nor snake, but somehow both. Ages of progress and ages of violence. A clawed hand reaching out to grasp the stars. A world torn asunder in red flames. A hardening of life, as if being encased in a shell. Another world, this world. Hope. Life. Future.
The man...lizard...whatever it was took its hand from Buck's head. Smith smiled. "Quite something, are they not? When they destroyed their own world, the survivors started to suppress their sense of adventure. Their sense of wonder. But who can survive without a sense of wonder? As the survivors traveled among the stars, their way of life became more and more rigid. It was in danger of ossifying entirely.
"And then they found this world. They have been studying it for quite some time, and have made contact with the power of their minds." The lawyer glanced at the Indians in the seats. "But only recently have they decided to set foot themselves on our humble sphere. Our employers here had hoped that they could learn something tonight. Re-discover something that they'd lost." Smith exchanged smiles with the leader of the group. "In that regard, I would call the evening a rousing success."
Buck looked from the lawyer to the group in the luxury box. Reptile-men from the stars. They had been performing for reptile-men from beyond the stars. He was having a hard time getting his mind around the fact. But maybe he had needed this as much as they had. Maybe it wasn't so bad that shows like this were about a myth. Not that you wanted to go around rewriting history and ignoring injustice.
But maybe the Myth of the West could be used to heal as well as entertain. Maybe there was a place that was big enough for people to get along and to write their own stories. If the West wasn't like that now, maybe they could make it more like the myth, at least a little.
Buck offered his hand to the leader of the group. "Any time you want a repeat performance, you just let me know."
The End.
It always grieves me when I read a well written original story, and see it has not been rewarded appropriately. Just under $3 for the two parts in total does not reflect on the quality of the writing, but on the flawed system steemit is struggling with.
I'm certain you are going to do very well and soon pass me in rep and earnings. I'll be glad to see it, for you deserve it.
Again, you're very kind.
I'm hoping I can build a readership here on Steemit, but until I have a larger one, much of my content has been previously posted elsewhere.
Probably by April it should be all new...
I don't care if you have published your stories before. At another site, I had published (made available) 12 or my 14 books and I had about 740 readers. I enjoyed it, but I did not make one cent and never received any constructive criticism, which I really wanted.
As for building your following, if you do not mind, I will paste here a comment I made for another author I liked, who asked how he should go about it. It may not all be relevant, but if any of it sparks off an idea or two, it will be worth it.
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Obviously you would like to contact people who are interested in the kind of stories you write. That is fairly easy to achieve.
For instance, if you categorise your novel as being a fantasy story, then right click on the tag 'fantasy' and click on 'open in new tag'. Voila! you now have a page (or many pages) of posts made that used that category. Look through the authors and find a few whose writing you like.
In each one, make an interesting comment about the story, adding into it by insinuation that you also write similar kinds of stories. If you tell them you write, often they will ignore you. But if, for instance, you say, "the way you handled the meeting of Delilah with that alien Sampson, was brilliant; if I had written of that meeting, it would not have occurred to me that I should have him throw up all over her because of tasting a date, and thus having her fall in love with him because of some weird alien chemical in his green vomit." Okay, that was fun to write, but I hope it illustrates what I am trying to suggest? Make them feel curious so that they check out your blog (home page). Also, resteem a few good posts from them, so that they resteem some of yours.
If you have chosen authors with a decent following, their readers will also become curious and check your posts - hey, it is how I ended up here.
Please keep in mind that you could have 20,000 followers and have no readers. Most who follow, do so in the hope you will follow them, not because they ever intend visiting your posts. It is better to have a few hundred real followers. Also, I might be wrong, but if I see someone has 500 followers, but only follows 30, I skip following them. It is a fairly good indication that they will not be interested in reciprocating...
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Just so that I am clear about what I am hoping for: I do not want you, or anyone else to read my posts. I am not posting them for anyone to read (this applies to my stories, posts about videos, music, my 'Enjoy & Learn' series, my rare poems, I do not mind anyone reading. My stories are here only for me and the future).
Brilliant!
So glad you liked it!
I have another related story I'll post next week...