Thanks. I wish people don't read your comment before reading the story :p As you opened the suspense :p
And Jeff's dad was pointing towards him only. I still need to improve my writing skills :P May be you didn't understand what i was saying there actually.
Are you a lazy reader !! It is a big compliment for me if you actually read the whole damn story :p
Thanks a lot :D
lol, alrighty ! You are the Boss around here so I won't mess that up. But I thought you meant it like this.
"I love you son. You will find another job. Don't worry. Let's go back and don't you dare come here again." Jeff's dad pointed his finger towards cliff.
You used the term 'here' which gives a feeling that like everyone else Jeff dad was also afraid of the 'cliff' so he warned him not to come back here.
Anyway, wonderful work and yes I will be sneaking around here for a while. :) I just hope that you don't come up with an extended version of it like CID (I believe holds a record for too many episodes) and some other Indian Soaps. :p Tx
Hahaha, No it's over. I might come up with another story. This was my first time with fiction though. Found good response. So I will continue I guess. But my philosophies will also be on ;) Hehe.
Definitely you should.