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RE: Nora-Ceph (Luna 3, Part 2)

in #fiction7 years ago (edited)

Glad to see you published another part. Thank you 😃😃😃

The way you describe every peculiarity is what I like. I also try to do this in my stories but I miss the words because of not a very good command on english.
Don’t know how to improve it.

Edit :- By the way, you are missing a Star ⭐️ in the 13th para.

This story needs a complete knowledge about octopuses !! 🐙 Amazing how you turned it all to a science fiction. Waiting for the next part😋

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I like philosopher!