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RE: Resistance (Luna 3, Part 17/Final Part)

in #fiction7 years ago

Awesome. Now we just need a part 16 spinoff series.

One question: why do you describe her skin as ashy? here:

Tears fell from his eyes onto Nora-Cephs ashy skin and rolled down her cheeks.

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Because she's dead. The skin of dead people is often described as having an "ashy" color. I wanted to make it very clear Nora-Ceph died

Ahhhh ok I didn’t put two and two together.