I really enjoyed this conclusion. Again, you have a real gift in summoning vivid images. I somewhat agree that maybe nature is not quite the force you had hoped to create but it doesn't detract from the story. If you are keen to showcase how our environment shapes our decisions and actions, perhaps you could work that in when the driver picks up the thief and girl. Maybe he doesn't see them or wouldn't have seen them if it hadn't been for the moonlight or some other type of device. This would be subtle but it might still serve your intention. Thank you for sharing this!
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