Nicely done, @tabyington! I see this as a parable. I've read it several times. I see some tongue-in-cheek here and there and it alternately makes me wince and smile. :-)
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Nicely done, @tabyington! I see this as a parable. I've read it several times. I see some tongue-in-cheek here and there and it alternately makes me wince and smile. :-)
Thank you for your feedback @jayna . It was a fun story to write and I look forward to entering more of your contests.