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RE: A Day in the Clouds (Chapter 7) - The Hours Between 1100 and 1200 (Part 1 of 2)

in #fiction8 years ago

I guess that's one of the reasons why I decided to put up SILVER LINING. The action-packed section was something I really want to surprise readers with. Kind of like a reminder that this is still a work of fiction haha I used "spinning disks" and "legs" interchangeably since "creature" and "machine" are a big point of confusion for him. Ledd doesn't really see things as inanimate, especially since they're moving. I wanted to touch on childhood ignorance there. Thanks for pointing out that there's a point of confusion there. It's something I would need to consider.

Also, I explain the three legged beasts in the SILVER LINING for that chapter.