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RE: "Justed" - A Glimpse Into The HardFork Universe of 2029

in #fiction7 years ago

An interesting concept, @creatr - This post has been ranked within the top 25 most undervalued posts in the second half of Nov 30. I estimate that this post is undervalued by $39.77 as compared to a scenario in which every voter had an equal say, LOL

So how could it have paid more? IMHO, you could have partitioned this post into at least 2 parts,maybe 3 or 4 if you fleshed out the resolution- ie, the trial part. After your build-up the resolution was too hurried. I'm aiming for 500-700 words per post, so if it takes 10 parts, so be it.

This was a really good concept and your inclusion of futuristic technology was fascinating. Just some practical suggestions so you can hit the trending page - I want to hit it more often myself but if I can help a friend along, Bonus!

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Hi, John!

Thank you so much for the excellent counsel... Much appreciated, and noted.

However, as a contest entry post, it never occurred to me to split it into multiple sections....

Anyway, your observations are well taken and I will keep them in mind.

Ah, a contest Entry - well I suppose that precludes the instalment plan :)