There is a very common expression in Caribbean lands: "Life gives you surprises" (as Rubén Blades sings in a famous song). That's a little what happens to Eve, who, like the biblical character, discovers mystery and vulnerability. I think you create a good psychological atmosphere in your tale, @samminator; well conceived the main character and also the ghost that is presented to him. Thank you for your story.
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No matter how courageous we might claim to be, we are not absolutely immune to vulnerability. Eva just had to discover this the hard way; but she now knows that fear can also help one to survive; not just courage.
Thanks for coming around