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RE: ADSactly Fiction: Tripping Over An Impossible

in #fiction5 years ago

The game of the lovers - strangers or rediscovereds - is always a very attractive motif in the common narrative, literary or cinematographic, and you pick it up very well in your story, @nancybriti. A certain ambiguity at the end creates the conjecture about if they are really strangers, or if they are experiencing a rejuvenation of their attraction as a couple. And that makes your text more interesting. Thank you and greetings.

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As always, you have deciphered the meaning of the story very well, @josemalavem. There are postponed loves that know neither time nor space. Greetings and thanks for commenting!