Really? I worry it's too "internal." I'm looking forward to the final chapter tomorrow: confrontation, decisions, resolutions, lol. I'm glad you liked it, I just couldn't keep going any further with it today and it seemed like a good stopping point. I hope the end pays off well for the readers :)
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Well - internal wounds/struggles are the more devastatingly permanent ones, you know? You did it incredibly well here. Didn't seem too-dwelly. And your deliciously apt descriptions of seemingly simple things and objects are so very alive - I'm there.
PS: I'd also posit that forgiveness or lack thereof can too constitute an arc, Jess. :-)
Thank you so much! Too dwelly is exactly what I feared. I feel better now 😅