Thank you! :)
There is probably a lot wrong with it, truth be told. In my mind, if I was a new reader to the story, I'd probably give it a maximum of 3 stars and that's being generous! It was written in one month, edited ONCE, and then thrown to the winds of fortune........ I'm usually an edit, edit again, edit AGAIN, change this entire chapter, edit again, rename that character, that town, decide that this character is suddenly an antagonist... rewrite the whole thing and edit AGAIN.... 5 years have passed...... LOL :)
This is a first for me. I pray for the best.
I believe the winds of fortune are going to bless you. That is awesome and well done.