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RE: FICTION: Sorting the After

in #fiction4 months ago

Wow! Tears in my eyes. Well done, eliciting that kind of emotion.

I especially like the ending:

“Jamie sent them,” I whispered. “He sent them for me.”

The Red Cross worker nodded. “We believe such things here. He is looking out for you, this Jamie.”

And this part:

Life continues. Love is eternal. Thoughtfulness never dies.

Seriously. Chills, Rhonda. You haven't lost your way with words.

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Thank you, Katrina! It means a lot, coming from someone who's talent is so formidable!