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RE: Your Forever Never

in #fiction3 years ago

Oh, my heart! Ma'am, this is just excellent!

An emotive and captivating story touching the heart of a failed love and marriage. I love your use of chess and fairy tale to convey the narrator's feeling.

Dear Joe, why did you let our main character down? This letter reminds me of an old school song by Ferlin Husky that I love to listen to -

Beautifully written. 😊

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I have never heard this song ... ahhhh, so sad
Timing is just so bad and sad eh
And ouch!!! The brother?!!!!!

Thank you Kemmy :D

Yep, the brother! Hehe.