Good story
I read every part of your story
They are really great
You are really a good script writer
Try some film or show writing
I'm sure you will succeed in that
https://steemit.com/contest/@manojm/contest-3-win-free-1-steem-by-defining-what-is-success
Check my blog and make some suggestion on improving it
It will be helpful for me
Thanks for sharing the story
Please don't advertise yourself on my posts. Next time I'll flag.
K I won't do it next time
Btw, rules like "upvote and resteem" often keep people from participating in a contest. You should leave it open with a comment like "if you want, resteem so others can join the tun too,"