Very sad and with a deep message, although it was elaborated in 5 minutes you picked up the reality of many houses in the world, parents who do not share the time they want to get enough money to eat, dress and study.
Unfortunately, Brandon wanted to drain his anger, his anger against what he considered that separated the love and time of his father, unfortunately all he got was to mark a greater sadness for his father.
I like to write in 5 minutes, I will try and we will communicate with you.
Thank you man for the compliments .. generally people write anything they want to when it comes to freewriting. However i take a different approach and try to write something meaningful through anecdotes and short stories.. i am naturally good with linguistics and literature. I have read a tremendous amount of both historical and modern literature and probably thats why my mind can craft stories really fast.
It is so awesome that i have inspired you to become a freewriter. Do visit @mariannewest’s blog. She is our mentor and creator of freewrite project.
Looking forward to make your acquaintance and reading your freewrite stories..