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RE: Leap Sleep - A Fictional Escape

in #fiction7 years ago

Victorious was the moment I unraveled your puppet show. I regretted the first time I made mistakes, but now... after all you've done to intentionally undermine my virtuous nature... now you just look pitiful...

The stories well presented envelop you, trap you, make you part of it, at some point I felt a scene of terror, a cold night, movements, dark sounds, dogs barking, hearts beating fast... I love it, I still want to know more.

Even though it's hard to translate, I enjoyed it very much, thank you for sharing.

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Glad I was able to captivate you for a quick read. 📔