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RE: Flash Fiction: Disintegration

in #fiction7 years ago

That was brilliant for a first fiction piece. Really not much I could criticize other that suggesting you make the paragraphs shorter to be easy on the eye. Give the reader enough break to pause and take it all in. Great work. Resteemed!

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Thank you for the suggestion, I'll be sure to take note of it. Warm regards!!