Freedom! This is an exciting chapter to read. It's got good pace and intrigue. And the internal dialogue mixed with external drama is a good mix. I'm enjoying your story. Looking forward to more :)
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Freedom! This is an exciting chapter to read. It's got good pace and intrigue. And the internal dialogue mixed with external drama is a good mix. I'm enjoying your story. Looking forward to more :)
Thanks, mate! I'm glad that you're enjoying this. Really though, I'm a bit surprised at the reaction this chapter has gotten. For me, this was really more of a gateway for the next chapter, which I consider as one of the most pivotal.
I really appreciate your continued support and your encouraging comments. It really means a lot coming from an author whose skill I admire :D