RE: And It Happened (Part 1)

[pangoli]

Kids stuff. You might want to check for a few errors. Other than that, you tried, but this didnt have any kinda theme behind it. Story was short-lived

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[yvo]

Thank you so much for the corrections. I'll improve in the next episode which will bring out the theme behind the story. Thanks for coming around.

[haikubot]

Thank you so much for
The corrections. I'll prove in
The next episode.

                 ^{- yvo}

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