I'm really glad you enjoyed it @f3nix especially as you said, having already read 15 alternative endings lol. It makes me happy and sure that I made a decent job of it that it didn't get boring or resemble any of the contest entries too much. It is also gratifying that the setting came across well as I have only visited Bangkok once and never went to Lumphini Park or the surrounding area. I had an strong overall impression of Bangkok but the rest of the detail was gleaned by google earth research. I do this a lot and have found it to be an effective technique with having quite a strong visual descriptive palette. Anyway, just glad it was a fun read :-)
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