Going great! NO, scratch that. REALLY, REALLY great!
You are doing a very good job with character development and story line. This one is definitely a keeper.
Going great! NO, scratch that. REALLY, REALLY great!
You are doing a very good job with character development and story line. This one is definitely a keeper.
I'm very glad that you read it, and commented...... and that you liked it. At this point I've got a clear direction and I'm feeling good about the story. In truth, the earlier chapters really need to be re-edited into something a bit different, and they will be in time. Thanks for reading!