Glad you found something to like about this, hah. I had lots of problems with this chapter. A general writer's block, and then my computer encountered an error twice during writing, shut down and cost me a lot of progress. That lead to me rewriting certain parts twice.
I don't know, I'm not happy with this one at all, but it's posted, so I'll try to salvage the story in the upcoming chapters.
But thanks for checking it out!