The old man on the bench

in #fiction7 years ago

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Every morning old Jeremiah Stuart took his coffee mug and his cardboard sign down to the park bench. He placed the sign on the bench next to him and sipped his coffee, waiting.

The sign read: SIT HERE FOR REWARDING CONVERSATION. But no one did.

Every evening old Jeremiah Stuart picked up his sign and his coffee mug full of change and returned to his million-dollar apartment, where he ate dinner alone and went to bed alone.

He had no family, no friends, no pets, no one with whom to share the last few weeks of his life.

And so it went, morning and evening the same routine, day after day. He tried other park benches, other places. Some days he returned home with more change than other days, but always there was change. No one sat down beside him to talk.

One night he laid down to sleep and did not wake again. When his passing was finally noticed and his decaying body found, there was on his nightstand a note:

Just wanted to give my fortune to somebody nice.
Now it’s too late. Disease took me.

Jeremiah Stuart





Originally posted on my blog at http://www.shawndove.com/blog/

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Great story! I felt so many emotions in such a short span. Genuinely teared up at the ending. Thanks for sharing this!

Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Short, sharp and to the point. This one packs quite a punch. Powerful piece of social commentary wrapped in great fiction.

Thank you. I'm honored by such kind words!