Death (Perfect Humans, Part 7)

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”Nurse! Time of death?”

”19:25, October 23, 2067”, Claire answers.

”Alright, my job here is done, there is nothing I can do for the patient anymore. Roll her bed to the morgue and then go home. Your shift ended an hour ago!” The Doctor doesn’t wait for Claire to react but immediately leaves the room. Doctors rarely like it when one of their patients dies. Especially when the government still needed said patient to gain information about an underground terror organization.

Claire walks over to the lifeless body of Eve … Hel and puts her hand on her ex-girlfriend’s face. The skin is cold.

With a sigh, Claire loosens the rolls on which the bed stands, grabs the bed frame and pulls it out of the room, into the elevator. As she presses the button for the morgue she wonders who thought it would be a good idea to store the dead people in the basement. That just screamed horror movie to her.

The morgue is empty, the mortician only comes in when there is a recent death – and never at a time like this. Claire’s job was to put the bodies in the freezer. But she doesn’t roll Hel’s bed towards the freezer. Instead, she leaves it in the middle of the room and takes the elevator up again. This time to the nurse’s break room.

In there, she opens her locker and takes out a heating blanket, a normal blanket and a thermos flask, then turns around and heads back to the morgue.

”Come on, this really has to work”, she mumbles as she covers Hel with the heating blanket, puts the plug into the socket and turns the blanket on. Lowest setting.

”Alright Hel, let’s do this”, Claire says and starts to give Hel CPR. From time to time she stops to check Hel’s body temperature, which steadily rises.

At 34°C, Claire feels a heartbeat.

”Yes! Science!” She calls out and stops the CPR to give Hel a chance to breathe herself. Slowly, very slowly, the not-so-dead woman’s chest rises and sinks by itself.

A bit later, Hel regains consciousness.

”Claire? Did it work?”

”Well, if it didn’t you’d probably not be talking to me right now. Here, have some tea.”

She gives Hel some tea which she poured in the thermos flask’s cap.

”You need to give your body a moment to stabilize. Hypothermia is no joke.”

”Yes, but it was a great way to fool this doctor into thinking I’m dead, although I hated all that cold water”, Hel notes.

”This doctor hates the fact that he has to work here, I doubt someone more concerned about your health would have been fooled so easily”, Claire says.

”Maybe you’re right. But the important thing is, they think I’m dead, at least for the moment. Now, how do we get out of here?”

”That’s actually easier than I expected.” For a moment, Claire rummages through her pockets, then produces an unmarked white card.

”The morgue has its own exit so that the bodies don’t have to be transported through the whole prison. No guards there.”

”We can just walk out?”

”Well, not exactly. We still have to pass the main gate.”

”And I guess there will be guards at the main gate?”

Claire nods.

”But we’ll get through, at least I hope so. I hid a spare uniform of mine right outside the morgue’s exit, together with a visitor’s pass. We will just pretend you’re a young nursing student who visited me today to get some experience.”

”Won’t they notice that I never went in?” Hel asks, skeptically.

”Those guards are pretty dumb. But even if they weren’t, it’s our only shot. You can’t stay here in the morgue forever.”

”True. Well then, let’s roll.”

Claire swiftly goes outside and returns with the uniform. As she helps Hel to put it on, she notices several scars.

”Those weren’t there the last time I saw you naked”, she remarks.

”No. I got shot once or twice recently. It all healed quite well though.”

”You’re living a dangerous life.”

All dressed up and with the visitor’s pass dangling from a ribbon around her neck, Hel follows Claire outside. The cold autumn air makes her shiver, as she still hasn’t completely recovered from her fake death.

When they arrive at the gate, the guard barely glances at their passes.

”New trainee?” He asks Claire.

”Yeah, her first day in here.”

”She looks a bit old to be a new student. But I guess some secondaries need a bit longer to finish school. Or is she a tertiary? She doesn’t look too bright.”

Hel needs to bite her tongue to not answer anything that could endanger Claire and herself. Claire just gives the guard a fake smile.

”Yeah, she’s a tertiary. Great for the menial work but not really that bright. I had her emptying bedpans all day long. She’s pretty good at it.”

”Well, then I won’t keep you two for too long. Get home safe.”

Finally, Hel and Claire are out of sight of the prison gate.

”That was easier than expected”, Hell says. ”Although I really wanted to punch that prison guard.”

”You’re not the first one to have violent feelings towards him”, Claire says and chuckles. ”He’s always been a prick.”

Just as Hel opens her mouth to answer, a man steps in front of them onto the road.

”Oh shit!” Claire exclaims as Hel steps in front of her to shield her with her body from the possibly dangerous man.

”Hel?!” The man calls out, clearly surprised. ”How the fuck did you get out of there?”

”Alexander?”


References:

Survival after Drowning with Cardiac Arrest and Mild Hypothermia

“Nobody is dead until warm and dead”

Symptoms of hypothermia

When the Living Appear Dead


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The photo you attached is so very apt! I'm still waiting for that luch date. Can't help myself, I'm a fan of romance novels - although I'm fast becoming a fan of Science because of you. Never thought a person could be dead for 6 hours 52 minutes and still live to tell the tale. So that's why Claire wasn't in a hurry to resuscitate Eve!

PS. I've decided to hold on to your sources and let my girls read them. I'm sure they'll be thoroughly impressed. I can't thank you enough for all that you share here.

Guess I'll have to write an epilog to give you that lunch date.. There are three more parts to come but they didn't find the time to have a nice lunch together.

I was just kidding, @suesa. Although it would be interesting to see what Science-related topic you would inject on a date. 😊

I'm new here to steemit, looking for a place to really practice what I love, writing fiction and learning from the critiques that may follow. Awesome to find this at the top under fiction while searching what others are doing. I've had published one book (non) feeling fiction may be easier. NOT, but is much more rewarding and a lot more fun. Not sorry I jumped in the middle of this story and can't wait to read what I've missed so far and what's to come. Will look forward to honest reviews and tips should you run across my writings.

It is not easy to create a best story. But, you do it clearly and very interesting

Before i say good job @suesa
You have made a story of deceitful fraud, but its purpose for good. You care deeply about life.

In the story of the morgue the morgue has its own door. My question is whether the corpse can go alone?

@suesa the story is good
I've seen your post and I'm amazed. The story is very reasonable and appropriate from the story in the previous post.
This struggle is not in vain. Indeed yes to do something for good sometimes we have to lie. Because not everyone supports the work that we do if not proven results. That's what life calls it.
Thank you for sharing @suesa interesting story.

An interesting story, from pretending to die to wanting to be a young student boy is just a blur of purpose from the morgue. And there meets a guard who's a lot of freaks until they're almost crazy. Thanks for sharing, good story

That is a good and interesting article. Well done @suesa
Have a great day!

An interesting story for all of us here, Yeah, he's a tertiary. Good for rough work but not too bright. I've emptied the bed all day. He's pretty good at it, thanks for your post, may be useful for all readers of your article. @suesa

Great release friend :)

Good job

@suesa you are such a great writter .I didn't read the perivious parts but after reading this part I really want to read the perivious ones.thanks for upload such great content.

Okay, I hope the next part reveals, why Alexander is wandering around the prison right at the moment Hel got out there :)
But you won´t make a love story out of this with Alexander & Claire fighting for the love of Hel, while she´s not sure about her own feelings, or will you?

Hel is a lesbian so don't worry, not interested in Alexander. And Alex knows that. :D

Oh, that´s good news. Wasn´t sure whether you wanted to turn it into a love story ;)

Good story

Very sneaky of Claire and Hel. Two enthusiastic thumbs up again, looking forward to the next bit!

That's exactly the meme I was thinking of while writing

Damn love triangle?! Hel, Claire, and Alexander? Hahaha! This is getting intense! I'm eagerly waiting for part 8 @suesa When is she gonna find out that she's a primary? What will happen to the parents who took the embryos? Damn, I can't wait to read what's going to happen next! You're a genius!

Why does everyone expect a love triangle? Popular media has ruined you :'D

Or maybe not. I just realized, Claire is a lesbian. :D

You noticed part 8 is online?

ooooh I'ma check it out now. Thanks, you're my favorite sci-fi author now! :-D

Good post