What narration! Brilliant. It's seriously is brilliantly portrayed. One's loneliness,sad state of affairs to get grip on human emotions like this needs a lot of character. The potrayal of adverse grief and pain is so immaculate. It's such an demanding phase in life when you go through nightmares every now & then. I like that part when she stopped for a while and started to have a look at Street full of running people, feeling that energy,those emotions on different faces of people. Its so true when you are down and out, we all actually tend to this A happy smiling face makes your day sometimes, and you get that hope. Damn I can be happy too, I can smile too :)
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She's an octopus who replaced a human's brain.
Read you earlier parts too :)
Amazing fiction
It's jus that line got so connected with the real emotions too
Oh okay ^^ As you might see, most comments on here didn't even read this post.
This was my first read of your posts. I than had a look that It has got few earlier parts too
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