Great story, Daniel! I like when I read to feel emotions and make a movie in my head. Your stories did it to me every time. This one, especialy.
Great story, Daniel! I like when I read to feel emotions and make a movie in my head. Your stories did it to me every time. This one, especialy.
Wow, what a great comment @tasjun, thanks! With short fiction you don't have a lot of real estate to navel-gaze/get deeply philosophical, so I always try to emphasize lucidity, a story that resonates and absorbs quickly.