Truly beautiful and vivid imagery. This flows like a tall drink on a hot summer night. Keep it going!
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Truly beautiful and vivid imagery. This flows like a tall drink on a hot summer night. Keep it going!
Hmmnnn, I may redact my statement that this is the concluding part, maybe. Not sure where I would go with it after this. I wanted to leave it kind of open ended, where you don't know what has really happened in the way that someone who had ingested far too much mescaline might view time in a non-linear way. My idea was to move on to another ongoing freewrite, in a specific genre I haven't touched on steemit yet. I will think long and hard about it as I have had amazing feeback from people on this story with Ash in it. Honestly @wandrnrose7, do you feel like it is not quite complete? I value your feedback and there was a small part of me that worried that I hadn't tied things up well enough.