So I started reading this and thought, "Okay, so I'll go down a chapter or two to see what this is about." Then I came across this...
"Damnit, no flux capacitor."
Bahaha! Yes! Okay, I'm definitely finishing this now. Good work @complexring and I'll be back to post my thoughts.
No, Joshua! Don't go to her! She's lying!
Okay, I'm hooked. Any time table for posting the next part?