Love it. We used to get these challenges set to us by one particular tutor who called them, "Haiku stories". The trick always seems to be to create the feeling of a narrative which stepped far beyond those words on the page and you've done that here wonderfully.
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Thanks so much, @damianjayclay! Yes, I agree, that is the goal, and it isn’t easy to achieve. I’m so glad to hear that you feel this one managed to do that! 😊