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RE: New 50-word story prompt, plus an announcement

in #fiftywords6 years ago

Her mouth quivered, tears pooled at its corners -- I thought, “why couldn’t she have been a better person?” Then I turned, and said goodbye to my mother for the last time. Passing through a threshold, her thick lips, unwanted hair, and dark black shaded skin was all I left behind.

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Thanks for participating in the 50-word challenge. Is this your first entry? You'll want to post your challenge entries on your own blog and provide the link here. (Just for future reference.) Welcome to the challenge!