Departed, a story in 50 words.

[deirdyweirdy]

It was always to the same place she went, to a glorious stretch of golden sand with the rhythmic pulse of the waves breaking allowing her mind to drift, and transporting her far away, away from the vicious blows he rained down upon her in retribution for some imagined transgression.

fifty word challenge
The prompt this week is 'journey.Posted in response to @jayna's.

The image is my own.

Comments

[juliamulcahy]

I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. I'm impressed at how much story you were able to convey in 50 words.

[deirdyweirdy]

Thanks a lot for the encouraging comment. Much appreciated.

[hamg96]

You are good at what you do
Teach me how to do this
Please

[deirdyweirdy]

What a sweet compliment! Thank you.

[hamg96]

Always welcome.
Always.

[wakeupkitty]

Will you teach how?

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[robbieretard]

What a wonderful 50 words, so much said in so few words.

[jayna]

Well done, @deirdyweirdy. Very interesting that you chose to tell the story in one sentence. To me it represents that she has held her breath, trying to hold herself together, until she can get to a place where she is at peace. Abuse is a terrible thing.

[deirdyweirdy]

Cheers Jayna. I appreciate the encouragement.

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[wakeupkitty]

Will she go back?

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