Very nice! You did very well with your first 50-word story. There is a lot going on here, and there are some powerful forces at play. So the main character and another woman love the same man, but only she had a baby with him. Now is it the child or the man disappearing into the sea?
You don’t have to answer. Maybe other readers want to say what they think is going on.
It was an interestingly unexpected read to me, Jayna! I'm surprised and glad that my writing can be read on this level as well ) Thank you for sharing your impressions!