When I read the title, I was so excited about what you came up with. Suffice to say, I wasn't disappointed. Powerful depiction, and I really enjoyed the step by step look into it. Writing in the first-person really did wonders for this and overall you did a really great job.
Too bad your bonus story can't be counted, but I feel the qualified entry has a stronger chance. Best of luck! Keep on buzzing :D
This entry has been graded. Good luck!
Thanks. ^_^
And also thank you for taking the time to leave comments on every entry, I (and I'm sure the rest of the contestants) really appreciate the work you're doing.
You're welcome :) It has been my pleasure. This was a great batch to judge, and I'm so lucky to have been given a chance to do so.