50-Word Short Story Challenge:

in #fiftywords • 6 years ago

Thank you to @jayna for hosting yet another weekly 50-Word Short Story challenge, you can find this week's prompt here: Gift

"Keep them closed!"

Her eyes scrunch and my heart clenches, "I have a surprise."

She replies with a smile and bubbling laughter.

"Do you know what day it is?"

She shakes her head furiously.

"Open your eyes!" I exclaim.

Her eyes flutter open with a big grin.

"Happy Christmas Eve!"

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     6 years ago  

    I really like the sense of fun and surprise in this story, @jewlzie. You’ve captured that childlike experience when something wonderful is afoot.

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       6 years ago  

      Thank you so much for reading!

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