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RE: The Cursed Jewel [50 Word Story]

in #fiftywords7 years ago

Oh man, this is just great! I love how the 'curse' works on two levels; the literal time lost, and the more human flaw of George's search, thinking it could ever have mattered. You sure know how to pack these things to bursting point.

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Thank you! I am fairly pleased with how it turned out after a few revisions :)