50 word story contest week #14 (Light)

in #fiftywords8 years ago (edited)

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  Aurora Borealis luminosity is so bright  

The rich vivid serenity in its gallant might  

It is more than just a sight  

but its blazing glowing radiance tonight 

 As I stare at the skylight  

its lustred intensity is infinite  

the shinning illumination astonished light  

the northern lights are sure to invite     

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I found out about the 50 word contest from a fellow steemer who had posted a fifty word story which instantly caught my attention and had drawn me to it 

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Good poem! :-)

@awriter Thank you

Great work! It really captures the essence and majesty of the Aurora Borealis. I haven't seen it in person, but I'm certain it would evoke the same emotion. By the way, I'm the guest judge for this week, and I want you to make sure that you abide by the rules of the contest. Please re-read the regulations and reply to this message when you have inserted your changes. I would hate for this to be disqualified because of technicalities. Thanks!

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thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed reading will check out the rules :)

@renekroka thank you