And very nicely penned it is too @ebitularmbert. Welcome to #fiftywords!
On your questions below:
- As long as you add fiftywords as one of the tags it should appear in the fiftywords section so everyone can see it. I don't think it matters whether it's the first tag or the last.
- You can write as many stories as you like! There are no prizes to be gained. It's just for your own enjoyment and for the reading of others.
That is ok. Thanks