I like this ... you have showed character rather than told and it leaves the reader intrigued and wanting to more of the scallywag. Is there more to come?
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I like this ... you have showed character rather than told and it leaves the reader intrigued and wanting to more of the scallywag. Is there more to come?
Haha I was really developing this character while writing the story... and stopping to write about him seems impossible so YES there is more to come :)